Another Vision of You(Revised)

This is an old poem of mine that I revised a little. I hope you enjoy it!

Another Vision of You

You drift through my dreams
Like a sailboat on a placid sea
As fresh and beautiful…
As a dew draped white rose
As stunning…
As a tropical island sunset
You make my heart yearn for you
You make my body lust for you
You heighten my senses…
My expectations build
And then….you disappear
Leaving fleeting thoughts of you
Like raindrops…leaving ripples
On a beautiful blue lagoon
Thoughts of you…
Hold my imagination
Till the next dream comes
Another vision of you

Copyright © 2006 By Bruce

About ghosterb

I live in a little town in Virginia called Buffalo Junction. It's in between Clarksville and South Boston. I Love all kinds of music and poetry. I'm a night owl. I love the tranquility and mystery of the night.
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14 Responses to Another Vision of You(Revised)

  1. Wow very nice, the emotions flow through so well.

  2. Beautiful poem, Bruce. Very vivid and descriptive. You bring the scene to life and the emotion of love to it. Well done!

    My entry:

  3. magical somehow,

    enjoyed it.

  4. love it,

    winsome writing…


  5. This is wonderful! A lovely little piece, indeed! well done 🙂

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