Lost in the Moment Watching You!

Lost in the Moment Watching You!

Seeing her sitting there
Eyes closed
Skin glistening in the sun
Her hot pink bikini
Quickening my blood
And framing this beautiful picture
Is a striking blue sky
Sprinkled with soft, puffy white clouds
Floating by
God, I’m so totally lost…
In the moment watching you

The thunder is booming
Lightning lighting up the night sky
And there you are sleeping
So sweet, lovely an pleasing to my eye
Your soft breathing calms my mind
A soft smile graces your lips
As you dream your sweet dreams
And yes I’m totally lost…
In this moment watching you

The baby is cooing
As you gently rock her to sleep
A soft gentle lull-a-bye
Drifts lazily in the air and makes my heart leap
In all the world over there is nothing that can compare
And all that I can do is stare,
Taking in this beautiful vision
As I so totally get lost…
In this moment watching you!

© 2010 by Ghoster B.


About ghosterb

I live in a little town in Virginia called Buffalo Junction. It's in between Clarksville and South Boston. I Love all kinds of music and poetry. I'm a night owl. I love the tranquility and mystery of the night.
This entry was posted in Poetry. Bookmark the permalink.

23 Responses to Lost in the Moment Watching You!

  1. Jingle says:

    love the title,
    well expressed sentiments..
    powerful nature imagery…

    I invite you to attend poets rally week 35, where you share your poetry and make new poetic friends…poetry awards are assigned upon completion.

    let me know when you are ready.
    Merry Christmas…
    Stay Blessed….

    • ghosterb says:

      Thank you Jingle for taking the time to read my poem and then leaving this nice comment, I really appreciate it a bunch! I will check out the poets rally, thanks!

  2. Jingle says:

    do come in and join us…

    your talent deserves better attention….

    by becoming a participant, you can expose yourself to wider audiences…

    hope to see you in.

  3. terri0729 says:

    Glad to see you took Jingle’s suggestion! Nicely done. I really did enjoy your poem. Blessings, Terri

  4. Morning says:

    a fitting piece, well done.


  5. zongrik says:

    very sweet. i like the repetition, it’s powerful


  6. Jamie says:

    Fits in so well with the photo prompt.
    The words should be set to music, a Tony Bennett type of song, maybe.
    Nice write.

  7. ghosterb says:

    I agree with you, I think it could be set to music. Thanks for the comment my friend!

  8. smooth word flow.

    Thanks for sharing!

  9. ghosterb says:

    Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend!

  10. Bodhirose says:

    It’s easy to get lost in thought–watching a sleeping baby is one way. A great take on the prompt–well done!

    • ghosterb says:

      Yes there is something about watching a sleeping baby that prompts you to start daydreaming and thinking about the past. Thank you my friend for the wonderful comment.

  11. Kay Salady says:

    Descriptive of a woman’s charm and very lovely. Thank you!

  12. ghosterb says:

    Thank you Kay for stopping by and leaving a wonderful comment!

  13. This is wonderful… quite moving 🙂

  14. ghosterb says:

    Thank you so much my friend for the wonderful comment!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s