Her Eyes

I entered this short poem in a contest. You had to write a 15 word poem (or less) that describes the feeling of falling in love. I believe everyone that has been in love has experienced this feeling.

Her Eyes

Her eyes
Captivated my heart
Enticed my soul
And…Made me fall in love…

By Bruce


About ghosterb

I live in a little town in Virginia called Buffalo Junction. It's in between Clarksville and South Boston. I Love all kinds of music and poetry. I'm a night owl. I love the tranquility and mystery of the night.
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4 Responses to Her Eyes

  1. It’s lovely, my friend.

  2. Bravo! Yes, this is what it feels like. Nice work. Did you win? … not that that really matters. It’s the gift of poem that matters. Just curious.

  3. ghosterb says:

    I haven’t found out yet. Thank you Jamie for the wonderful comment!

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